Kevin Patterson ([info]pattersonphoto) wrote,
@ 2009-07-08 11:17:00
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Submission to Outside Magazine
Outside magazine has a place where you can submit one photo with a short, 300 words of less, story to go with the photo. They take there best for the magazine. I am planning on submitting the following. Julie, would you mind taking a crack at editing?

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Luckily, the ruins of la Cidudad Perdida, the Lost City, is in Colombia and not Japan. If it was in Japan, I would have to walk one step behind our guide, Walter, for the rest of his life until I saved his life in return. I do not want to have to hike that path again.

I fell in the first of eight river crossings. I was swimming, or more accurately, aggressively floating to a large rock to try and pin myself. Walter dove in after me. Later he told me that he has almost died five times in that river and it has always been at the spot I fell in.

As soon as we made shelter I crawled under a blanket. I slept 28 out of 36 hours underneath a mosquito net. I had a cough, my joints ached, and I had the shivers. I wasn't sure if it was malaria, a cold, or sheer body exhaustion. I prayed to God, and I don't pray to God often, to make it exhaustion. I did not want to be the sorry son of a bitch that they had to carry out of the jungle.

It had rained for three days. The excess weight in my bag was both my and the jungles sweat. My notebook was wrapped in plastic, and then placed in my camera bag, which was wrapped in plastic again. Yet it was still moist. The internal lens misted over. My fingers and toes had wrinkled in the constant dampness. The pack weighed heavier every day. It rained as we climbed the last 1,800 moss-covered stones. The German, Volker, counted. He claimed that is what Germans do.

The military men liked my camouflage poncho; they claimed it made us brothers.

The ruins were round.





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[info]razz
2009-07-08 06:30 pm UTC (link)
Sure--is it cool to e-mail comments, or do you want them posted here?

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[info]pattersonphoto
2009-07-08 06:37 pm UTC (link)
Whatever you prefer... Or do you like one of these two stories better?


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When saying hello, they give each other the “thumbs up” sign instead of a wave. Many people do this to each other. The guy going the other way on the dirt road, the workers shoveling through rocks on the side of the highway, the beautiful teenager on the back of the motorcycle; everyone smiles and gives us the thumbs up.
 
The thumbs up seems a surprising as a greeting to me. It is as if everyone is checking on each other, making sure everyone is alive. It’s rather encouraging.

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Hans and Tim taught the kids on the beach to throw and a U.S. football. They got a kick out of it but eventually the kids wandered back to stick ball. The lanky kid could just nail that tennis ball. On his third time at bat he pointed out and said, “I am going to knock this one all the way to America.”

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Either story would be used with one of these shots....







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[info]razz
2009-07-08 06:46 pm UTC (link)
I like your original pick best. I think it's the best picture/story pairing, too. The other two have potential, but they need more flesh on the bone to be as engaging, and I'm not sure the photos match as well.

Which of the three photos do you like best?

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[info]pattersonphoto
2009-07-09 02:16 am UTC (link)
My favorite is the 2nd one. But I don't think it goes with the story because it is not in the jungle. For now I will submit the first one with the first shot. I think I might be able to flesh out the thumbs up one for the second shot a little and submit it later. I got your edits. Thank you for doing that!

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[info]razz
2009-07-09 08:57 am UTC (link)
No worries! I wish I could've given more insight--I used to read Outside religiously when I was in high school, and I'd wallpaper my bedroom with the photos from it, but I haven't read it since.

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